I fund three articles about diversity from the same author, her name is Fancy, from Australia, She mentions a program that is been developing in Austria which is call: The “Diversity Works”, the program was created to help the community and show that diversity can be use as potent instrument.
The 2nd blogger is about thinking about Cultural Diversity. She said “that diversity is the variety of human cultures, social structures, belief systems, and strategies for adapting to situations in different parts of the world”, society should teach cultural diversity in school in order to maximize its benefits for all cultures.
The last one is Diversity at Church; some churches seem to be a place were segregation is reinforced. Church’s should not teach that; instead of that they should be a role model for other community.
In my personal opinion I think these three articles express a good writing, not just for the fact that had good grammar, spelling and punctuation. But because it had fluent expressions and the purpose is clear. She gives lot information with enough details about the program. By the type of writing that she wrote you could see that she has writing skills. Also the ideas are interesting and important. Her organization is logical and effective. The details that she gives help readers understand and appreciate the article. The writer show that she cares about the topic from her very strong opinion. There’s no doubt about how this writer feels about the whole Diversity program. Her clear purpose in the article is to make people understand that diversity is not, and should not be a negative thing in society.
The 2nd blogger is about thinking about Cultural Diversity. She said “that diversity is the variety of human cultures, social structures, belief systems, and strategies for adapting to situations in different parts of the world”, society should teach cultural diversity in school in order to maximize its benefits for all cultures.
The last one is Diversity at Church; some churches seem to be a place were segregation is reinforced. Church’s should not teach that; instead of that they should be a role model for other community.
In my personal opinion I think these three articles express a good writing, not just for the fact that had good grammar, spelling and punctuation. But because it had fluent expressions and the purpose is clear. She gives lot information with enough details about the program. By the type of writing that she wrote you could see that she has writing skills. Also the ideas are interesting and important. Her organization is logical and effective. The details that she gives help readers understand and appreciate the article. The writer show that she cares about the topic from her very strong opinion. There’s no doubt about how this writer feels about the whole Diversity program. Her clear purpose in the article is to make people understand that diversity is not, and should not be a negative thing in society.
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